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The Subjunctive doesn't die out
The Possibilities stay
And the Chances do prevail

"We should not wage war.
We could be better.
We would get closer together.
We might be the best,
But what about the rest?"

The Subjunctive doesn't die
The Possibilities stay
And Chances prevail
Especially the Chance to fail

"What if we do not see anyone behind us,
Because they already surpassed us?"

So concerned speakes the Old West,
That still consideres Chances,
That were already taken by the Rest.
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The "core phrase" just randomly came to me, the rest is strongly influenced, by the TED-talks by Hans Rosling [link]
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`lintu47 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello :wave:
You have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day :dalove:
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~irrenderNarr42 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wow...O.O
Thank you very much^^
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`lintu47 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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~irrenderNarr42 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
may i ask how you came to my poem and what you liked about it?
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`lintu47 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was browsing through the newest pieces submitted on dA. I am not great with expressing myself, but i liked its message, this is why i featured it : )
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~irrenderNarr42 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you^^
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`lintu47 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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~irrenderNarr42 Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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